VGFacts

It's supposed to be comedy.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DSGx_E09MMc

I'm in the starting phase of making "funny vids" so any advice on editing, camera positioning etc. would be appreciated.

To start, the title is too long with nothing going on in the background. I actually thought the video wasn't playing for a second... But after that, I thought the pacing was actually very good, and it was pretty funny.

You did well.