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Full Version: I wrote a CreepyPasta thing for my Creative Writing class.
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I just realized no one gave me any pointers or anything, because I turned it in at the last minute, so I have no idea how good it was or what needed to be improved on. The only person who's read it, besides me, is my girlfriend, who simply Girlfriended it by saying "It's great." and whatnot. Not really what I'm looking for.

Sooo... Here it is.

Oh, my warning: There's a good amount of cursing in this.

Rereading it, I feel like it's relatively dull in the earlier parts. I also don't like my choice to make the protagonist have hints of being the antichrist. Might've been better leaving it ambiguous.

EDIT: Okay. I thought I could upload it, but I don't think I can. And on here it's hard to see I made changes to the handwriting by using different fonts. I'll Italicize.
How did this get over 200 views and not a single response? Haha.
Meh, I dont read creepy stories (They scare me too much) so ill auto rate it 10/10, ok?