06-16-2014, 09:44 AM
The story is very interesting, but at times can get confusing and I find myself looking back at the story and reading the current part once or twice to see if I missed a hint of the location and setting.
Adessi ponders the thought of how the thugs managed to locate the group as they had only randomly teleported to that time and place. He wonders if the thugs have a leader and if they were targeting just Kyle, or if they knew that Adessi and he group were traveling to that time and so they were told to attack them as well.
Adessi ponders the thought of how the thugs managed to locate the group as they had only randomly teleported to that time and place. He wonders if the thugs have a leader and if they were targeting just Kyle, or if they knew that Adessi and he group were traveling to that time and so they were told to attack them as well.