03-31-2013, 06:19 AM
(This post was last modified: 03-31-2013, 06:23 AM by Ouberry_13.)
(03-30-2013, 10:38 PM)ThePlainGamer Wrote: Wow, this is pretty awesome, if you have any more writing I'd love to read it, also I agree with Seriously Though's critiques. Again though, I would love to read more of your writing. Also do you plan on publishing this?
I may post more, but only after fixing any of the obvious mistakes or after finishing writing a few more pages. As for publishing it, I'm not sure.
(03-31-2013, 05:04 AM)BomberJ Wrote: The text is really good. The plot at least. With the excepcion of a few grammar mistakes (that SERIOUSLY THOUGH gladly corrected) it's very good.
But, what's the text for? For a book? A short text for a contest?
It's for a book I'm trying to write. I tried to write one last year, but some of the plot ideas got a bit too complicated, and I couldn't figure out how to fix it, so I started over. This one has a new plot, characters, takes place in a different time period, etc. It's nice to hear there are some people interested in this, though.