10-26-2014, 04:48 PM
I had a feeling that the narrator was Tigerlily. You did a great job for a first time narrator, but a bit of advice would be to sound a little less like your reading from a script. You sound great hiding it for the most part but you can tell in a few parts where you go a little monotone.
The biggest complaint is with the comments. "Why is Popeye turning into Donkey Kong on video?" Becuse you know about it, that's why. Most people don't know about the PC Mario game. The video is ment to show off things you may not know of, and people only care about the most well know change.
The biggest complaint is with the comments. "Why is Popeye turning into Donkey Kong on video?" Becuse you know about it, that's why. Most people don't know about the PC Mario game. The video is ment to show off things you may not know of, and people only care about the most well know change.