(03-19-2015, 03:42 PM)Kakariko Kid Wrote:(03-19-2015, 02:04 PM)Boyobmas Wrote:(03-19-2015, 01:57 PM)Kakariko Kid Wrote: The bottom right of the robot is square-ish, the left is rounded. With no shading, the non-symmetry just seems...off, I guess.
I see what you mean, I'm still working on my tracing ability. As for the shading....I personaly think it looks better without it but oh well.
Well, I didn't mean it needs shading. What you have works, but to be able to pull off curves and contours and such, the lines drawn need to reflect that. You know what I'm saying, right...
I think I do, thanks for the constructive criticism!
Also, on the subject of cartooning class, my previous project was to make a logo for a new candy product using only the name I was given. Mine was "Off The Edge!" And this is what I eventually came up with:
![[Image: 5IiaCrR.jpg]](/image.php?src=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2F5IiaCrR.jpg&hash=ab25db47cdae796aba35febe8b43c034)
Yeah, I'm no good at coloring. This was actually my 3rd or 4th attempt but I do like how it turned out. Also, though it's hard to notice in this image, the letters of 'Edge' are all taped to the main paper to make it look more "3D" (and also because I was tired of my colors mixing all the time) Tell me what you think, guys!