08-22-2013, 03:45 PM
Try something like this
It's still a little weirdly worded but it's better.
Also, word to the wise, it's not a good idea to say something is terrible. It's more of a opinion term unless you can prove it, like Superman 64
Quote:Richard Jacques (the creater of the game's soundtrack) was unable to make the music sound the way he wanted. This is because he did not understand how to use the software given to him, coupled with the fact that deadline was so short that no one could help him learn how to use it.
It's still a little weirdly worded but it's better.
Also, word to the wise, it's not a good idea to say something is terrible. It's more of a opinion term unless you can prove it, like Superman 64