So, uh. I have to write a personal statement.

[Dazz]

I think you need to revise your introduction a little to be a little bit "I like this because this. I want to do this because this." and sort of state more that "Technology has been a fundamental aspect of my life for an extremely long period now, and I know nothing that I wish for more in life than to continue to work within this field as I move forward with my career."

Something along those lines, of course revising as you see fit. Obviously what I've said is a little weird in wording, but that's just how I talk. Change it to seem natural to you.