11-13-2014, 03:31 AM
"Hi my name is retrolinkx and I wanna learn two things. How to fuck shit sideways and how to do computers. I've been told that, if anything, I'm overqualified in the first field, so let's shit on some iMacs."
Nah don't do that, those kinds of statements are how I lost my scholarship AND my custody rights. I'm not going to super-edit like these guys, just try and mix up your statements a bit. Use fewer "I [blank]" sentence starters, make the reader feel a little engaged.
Nah don't do that, those kinds of statements are how I lost my scholarship AND my custody rights. I'm not going to super-edit like these guys, just try and mix up your statements a bit. Use fewer "I [blank]" sentence starters, make the reader feel a little engaged.