05-18-2015, 03:43 PM
(This post was last modified: 05-18-2015, 03:43 PM by retrolinkx.)
Have some emotional music in the background, and bring some saline solution so you can cry on cue at the end.
Nah, I joke. It's good, but I would probably change the "We’ve beaten the villain, rolled past the credits, collected the prize, and we’re waiting for the sequel." It feels kind of out of place to have, while it may sound good. I would maybe change it or take it out.
Nah, I joke. It's good, but I would probably change the "We’ve beaten the villain, rolled past the credits, collected the prize, and we’re waiting for the sequel." It feels kind of out of place to have, while it may sound good. I would maybe change it or take it out.