Critique My Channel

[linkncb16]

       
I was hoping I could get some opinions on my new channel/ first video. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated ^^ (I'm not posting this to spam or advertise) 
Channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC5Aplcv...B8hB4GlEuw
First Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yNxxEu48P0U

[Psychospacecow]

Maybe get to know us better.

[Furo]

(I'm not posting this to spam or advertise)

here's the thing, you're very obviously ignoring the rules about how to advertise videos here.
http://www.vgfacts.com/forums/thread-2167.html <this is the thread you need, first of all

[Beware of Cuccos*]

Locking.