11-14-2014, 04:06 PM
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That's a damn good personal statement. Personally I like the idea of coming back full circle. Kind of like a conclusion to an essay, you come back to the main point. Maybe slightly alter paragraph 2 and put it at end?
Just an idea, but it's pretty much a Grade-A personal statement.
That's a damn good personal statement. Personally I like the idea of coming back full circle. Kind of like a conclusion to an essay, you come back to the main point. Maybe slightly alter paragraph 2 and put it at end?
Just an idea, but it's pretty much a Grade-A personal statement.