A video I made

[Dutchtica*]

It's supposed to be comedy.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DSGx_E09MMc

I'm in the starting phase of making "funny vids" so any advice on editing, camera positioning etc. would be appreciated.

[Lazlo Falconi]

To start, the title is too long with nothing going on in the background. I actually thought the video wasn't playing for a second... But after that, I thought the pacing was actually very good, and it was pretty funny.

[Psychospacecow]

You did well.